la salle is more than a school to me , its my home . never knew a better place to be. education was never plain to see if u know what i mean ??
when i was down la salle was the place to be, where it will turn ma frown upside down , la salle my home secured my goals in life , trying to make a path , another way for me to see .
la salle is like cure for sickness , like a doctor's patient waiting to feel better instead la salle cures you now rather then later.
supports you , helps you , makes you feel that YOU JUST WANT TO STAY TRUE TO YOU "......
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Hey, that's some pretty good creative writing there....is your post in the format of a novel?
It actually reminds me of a blurb on the back of a novel, where they give a you a short rundown of what you are about to read, the picture of the logo to me does suit the writing because of this....
Having just moved here from outside of Auckland I have never heard of De La Salle...but reading this makes me feel like there is more to the story.
I'm interested to know more about De La Salle and why you think of this school as your home away from home. :)
Does this college have a system where they let everybody know about the successes of past students? Maybe you could get in touch with them and write a piece about your time there, it might encourage other students to keep working and studying hard :)
Do they teach spelling there?
TX
yup tes i checked my cment agen
pretty solid mate although i dislike the school LOL kidding! oh & LOL @ Tessa's comment ! haha
is this in a form of poetry?
i think this form of writing is appropriate to your image because school is the first stage where you start to develop different writing skills & here you have developed a good piece of poetry (:
i also think that lyrics would be another appropriate form of writing that would be suitable for your image. however, it is similar to a poetry but i think it would be great to write a song about your school (:
Rose,
your critical feedback is on task, keep up the good wok,
cheers Hobbs
Tepora,
cheeky!
Your comment includes your opinion, backed up by some observations and suggestions, well done. (Don't forget to include research in the future.)
Cheers Hobbs
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